Poems

hi this week we were told to post our favourite poem that we've made this term.

I Hear …

When I think of the beach

I hear

The laughter of kids

As they get caught by the waves.

The sound of shells being broken

Like the sound of cracking plastic.

The waves crashing into the shore

Like a pack or rhinos running along.

Screams as kids crash, crushing shells.

People yelling

The voices bouncing like a beach ball.

The waves as they came down

And wash away the day

People start to leave.

The birds singing out

With no more noise.

By William

This is the poem I have chosen it is one of my favourites because I like some of the words and some of the features I have used like similes. my favourite line would have to be The sound of shells being broken Like the sound of cracking plastic. I like this one because it just sounds so realistic to me at least.

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